A shock awaits you
ah lovely lovely
i receive the tender shock:
a human looks me in the eyes!
i am the cat
hello
your words grace my dawn
the day beckons
the moment purrs
Thank you , Deborah, for your little cat poem response to my poem! Very nice.
i return and am struck again
by your brilliant expose
of our passive self immersion in junk:
which is a type of avoidance
an attachment to irrelevance
Thank you, Deborah. That self-immersion is a preoccupation and a personal battle of mine. Need to focus on raising my consciousness.
ah lovely lovely
i receive the tender shock:
a human looks me in the eyes!
i am the cat
hello
your words grace my dawn
the day beckons
the moment purrs
Thank you , Deborah, for your little cat poem response to my poem! Very nice.
i return and am struck again
by your brilliant expose
of our passive self immersion in junk:
which is a type of avoidance
an attachment to irrelevance
Thank you, Deborah. That self-immersion is a preoccupation and a personal battle of mine. Need to focus on raising my consciousness.